I think that the first photo is an amazing window display. It is eye catching and has lots of dimension. I love the way that the walls are different dimensions as they break apart to show the clothing being advertised. I love the variety in color as it breaks as well. It looks very symmetrical and well put together. Overall a great display. I also love the second display photo because it used all of the space give (which was large) without making it seem under done or overdone. It is very symmetrical and well put together.
I think that the first window display is not done well because it doesn’t really tell a story. It uses very little props and while the idea of creativity is there the message is not well received as it is hard to understand what that idea might have been. I think that the use of more props and mannequins could have really helped this display. The second photo is wild and very loud with a lot of stuff going on. I think it is hard to decide what the message and story are. It just looks like clothes were just thrown together for a display quickly and not well thought out.
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